Opinion Essay- Adrian

Nowadays people believed that violence in our society, especially among teenagers, increases when more violence is shown on television. 

 Firstly, we have the news that are always focusing on domestic violence. It is clear that this is a current problem which will not be solved only showing many cases of violence in TV. I think this doesn’t help to solve the problem. It would be better raising awareness about the situation. It is also true that cartoons are getting more violent because they want to become more complex and obtain a great market share. If I were a TV producer I would try to create social responsible cartoons. 

Secondly, the most important factor for preventing violence is education at school and also at home. The statement “they do what the see” is in part because of the lack of control from parents that buy a new Ipad or mobile to their children at an early age and then can’t exercise control of what they children’s are watching. This is the main reason why many kids have an early childhood. 

 In conclusion, I believe that if society becomes more conscious of the problem, it would help try to adopt effective measures against this incoming violence.